Innocence  Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

  1. I say he's neutral because although he has been encouraging Iein todo things, nothing good or bad has come out of him.
    Great job on the new post.
    For Endgame, what weapon would you like to see your character get?
    Seth
     
  2. As always, thanks Seth!

    And for endgame I wouldn't mind a knife or something along the lines. But whatever you think up is fine. Suprise me if you want.
     
  3. Interesting? I thought that at midnight lol, I was half-asleep
     
  4. Lol. Well I won't say if it's right or wrong. Don't want to spoil anything.
     
  5. K, can't wait for the next chapter!
     
  6. Haha, me neither. I've got about a sentance written. Not sure where to begin with this. XD
     
  7. HA! TAKE THAT, WRITER'S BLOCK!
     
  8. Ugh. Please put all comments on the feedback thread. Please. I'm begging.
     
  9. Thanks. But could you please use the feedback thread from now on? I'd really appreciate it.
     
  10.  a poke for a nice job,


    -poke-
     
  11. Thanks! 

    there's a good part comming up. But it's not the part that you guys are thinking of. (Mwahaha!)
     
  12. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
     
  13. A-W-E-S-O-M-E
     
  14. It's extra good. With a capital x
     
  15. I havent read the story (partly because I cant read) But it has many words in it so it must be very good! Good job
     
  16. I havent read the story (partly because I cant read) But it has many words in it so it must be very good! Good job
     
  17. Thanks! 
     
  18. Write more!!!! I read it last night before I went to bed thinking it was done so I let myself get into it.... Then you didn't finish it!