Innocence  Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

Page 19 of 23
  1. The post was supposed to be short. But apparently I have a few more posts then I thought...maybe....
     
    #361 *Irin (01), Jan 12, 2011
  2. That was interesting. Looks like a climatic scene.
     
    #362 Starwars6374, Jan 12, 2011
  3. My lips are sealed.


    But Im soooo happy Im almost finished. It's been almost a year since I first started this.
     
    #363 *Irin (01), Jan 12, 2011
  4. IRIN YOU KILLED RENETHON OFF
     
    #364 FeatherHunter, Jan 12, 2011
  5. *opens mouth as if i am about to say something, then closes*

    *is speechless*
    *isnt speechless anymore*
    Y DID U MAKE HIM DIE????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
    *takes out my thumb cutting knife*
     
    #365 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 12, 2011
  6. Mayb he'll live
     
    #366 FeatherHunter, Jan 12, 2011
  7. Put the thumb knife down reg. It's a bad idea. (gives a very sorrowfull thumbless, thumbs down)
     
    #367 Keir117, Jan 12, 2011
  8. Ur making innocence 2??
     
    #368 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 12, 2011
  9. u should name ur second book Guilt
    cuz guilt is the opposite of innocence!
     
    #369 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 12, 2011
  10. -gives kier his thumbs back-

    he's not dead. He might die soon, he might not. But untill you read the next chapter, I would like to ask you:

    (1) Do you want Renethon to live?

    (2) Why or why not?

    Your answer may or may not influence my disision.

    And yes, I will be writing a sequal to innocence.
     
    #370 *Irin (01), Jan 12, 2011
  11. Nooo he has to live!!
     
    #371 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 12, 2011
  12. Reg, thanks, but I already have plans for the second title. Thanks anyway though.
     
    #372 *Irin (01), Jan 12, 2011
  13. idk...
    if he lives ur romance could develop (and every good book needs atleast a little romance!)
    if he dies it will be all dramatic and sad and u could start a romance with a different character
    either way it will be good!
    but im wondering how he could possibly live...
     
    #373 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 12, 2011
  14. ok
     
    #374 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 12, 2011
  15. You wonder how he might live?

    Magic might play a key role.
     
    #375 *Irin (01), Jan 12, 2011
  16. Hmm @keir if u just got ur thumbs back wat were u typing with until now

    @irin i say live i wanna c how it turns out with him
     
    #376 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 12, 2011
  17. Yea irin could finally get healing skills
     
    #377 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 12, 2011
  18. I got a monkey for a typist who types when I dictate to him (he's not very good I think that's why every message I sent had monkeys in it)
     
    #378 Keir117, Jan 12, 2011
  19. lol
    but then u would have to rush all the way across the battle and avoid everybody and instantly heal him cuz a wound like that can kill him pretty fast.
     
    #379 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 12, 2011
  20. lol
     
    #380 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 12, 2011
(You must log in or sign up to post here.)
Page 19 of 23