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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

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  1. Rofl
     
    #321 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  2. i read up to the part where iZ turned into a snake and killed the werewolf
    and also,
    IF U CUT OFF HIS THUMBS U WILL GET BLOOD ON THE FLOOR!!!
     
    #322 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 9, 2011
  3. Poor old thumbless me
     
    #323 Keir117, Jan 9, 2011
  4. No matter what, it's still a great story. Keep writing it!
     
    #324 Starwars6374, Jan 10, 2011
  5. Done Very Good!
    5 Thumbs up!
    
     
    #325 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 10, 2011
  6. Thanks guys! New post!

    @Reg, eh, there are already some stains I'll never get out anyway.
     
    #326 *Irin (01), Jan 10, 2011
  7. @Kier, it's your fault. If only you had listened, you might have 10 fingers instead of 8...
     
    #327 *Irin (01), Jan 10, 2011
  8. I hope that post wasn't the end. It left me thinking what's going to happen
     
    #328 Storallelite, Jan 10, 2011
  9. Nope, not the end. Not yet. But I'm really excited to see what you guys think at the end!
     
    #329 *Irin (01), Jan 10, 2011
  10. You're leaving mlus in suspense! Don't stop!
     
    #330 Starwars6374, Jan 10, 2011
  11. *all of us
     
    #331 Starwars6374, Jan 10, 2011
  12. Technically thumbs aren't fingers
     
    #332 Keir117, Jan 10, 2011
  13. Great new post
     
    #333 *akai41 (01), Jan 10, 2011
  14. Nooo evil cliff hanger on the last sentence
     
    #334 *webs (01), Jan 10, 2011
  15. Thanks everyone!

    Hehe. I like evil cliff hangers.

    New post!!!
     
    #335 *Irin (01), Jan 11, 2011
  16. Great as always!
     
    #336 Starwars6374, Jan 11, 2011
  17. Thanks!!
     
    #337 *Irin (01), Jan 11, 2011
  18. Oohhhh now the title makes sense!! Great post!
     
    #338 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  19. Lol, yeah. I thought I gave you guys a clue when I wrote about the rare 6th sense, when Irin said something about being guilty. But yeah, this is the 'Title chapter'!
     
    #339 *Irin (01), Jan 11, 2011
  20. I was way off on this one I thout irin would be band/banished couse thout a trator
     
    #340 *webs (01), Jan 11, 2011
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