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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

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  1. **
    he...
    He...
    He uhhhh
    he died!!
    I preety much cried
     
    #421 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 13, 2011
  2. But it was a well-written death good book i cant wait for more
     
    #422 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 13, 2011
  3. Great ending! So is there gonna be a second book then?
    Seth
     
    #423 seth73, Jan 13, 2011
  4. Seth u need to get to work on YOUR story and yea therll b a second
     
    #424 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 13, 2011
  5. :'( I'm crying.....
     
    #425 *akai41 (01), Jan 13, 2011
  6. (but still great post)
     
    #426 *webs (01), Jan 13, 2011
  7. me 3 :(
     
    #427 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 13, 2011
  8. I keep thinking the boy u sent back into the city is gonna tie in somehow
     
    #428 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 13, 2011
  9. Thanks guys. And Seth, how about I don't post anything of book 2 untill you add a post to endgame?
     
    #429 *Irin (01), Jan 14, 2011
  10. So, either Seth writes or you don't?

    Hurry up or I'll force it out of you Seth!
     
    #430 Starwars6374, Jan 14, 2011
  11. Lol, I though it would be good motivation for Seth.
     
    #431 *Irin (01), Jan 14, 2011
  12. Loved the ending, I did cry when he died… can't wait for the next book!!
     
    #432 WW1225, Jan 14, 2011
  13. Thanks W!
     
    #433 *Irin (01), Jan 14, 2011
  14. Heh in interesting proposition. I guess I'll have to open up endgame in the morning.
    Seth
     
    #434 seth73, Jan 15, 2011
  15. Yay
     
    #435 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 15, 2011
  16. Wow this new post format is cool
     
    #436 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 15, 2011
  17. Bump:)
     
    #437 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 16, 2011
  18. THIS WAS AUCIOUS (awesome and righteous!)
     
    #438 FeatherHunter, Jan 16, 2011
  19. Lol and irin r u accepting some new characters to introduce in your next book? Ill take one if u r
     
    #439 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 17, 2011
  20. I'll take one too if you give me my thumbs back. Lol
     
    #440 Keir117, Jan 17, 2011
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