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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

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  1. Well, I just finished reading the whole thing. All I can say is:

    Please write some more!!!
     
    #301 Starwars6374, Jan 6, 2011
  2. I love the latest part!!!
     
    #302 *akai41 (01), Jan 6, 2011
  3. Thanks guys! Next part is up. Sorry for the wait.
     
    #303 *Irin (01), Jan 8, 2011
  4. Good chapter!

    Next post will be #150. Can't wait for the next one!
     
    #304 Starwars6374, Jan 8, 2011
  5. Great post Irin!
     
    #305 Storallelite, Jan 8, 2011
  6. Real nice Kier.
     
    #306 Starwars6374, Jan 9, 2011
  7. Thanks Stora!

    @Star, I didn't even notice that, lol. Maybe I should make that chapter the end. It would be really long though...never mind. I'll make it the 'Defender of the innocent,' chapter.
    And what about Kier?
     
    #307 *Irin (01), Jan 9, 2011
  8. Kier posted #150 on innocence
     
    #308 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  9. Wow...I can't believe I didn't notice that....
    DX
     
    #309 *Irin (01), Jan 9, 2011
  10. Lol
     
    #310 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  11. Irin, I think you can ask a mod to delete all the things that ppl other than u post on ur story threads.
    cheese did it

    and ur story is REALLY long,
    but the part that i read was awesome!
    u r an AMAZING writer!
     
    #311 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 9, 2011
  12. Lol, thanks reg! But soon the other posts won't really matter, because I'm almost done. What part did you get up to?
     
    #312 *Irin (01), Jan 9, 2011
  13. You should read it all regran it's really good
     
    #313 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  14. Yyyyyaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy innocence is active again I cout up and it's reeaaly good keep it up irin
     
    #314 *webs (01), Jan 9, 2011
  15. Omg its so long but the first page is 
     
    #315 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 9, 2011
  16. Sorry I thought it was funny at least
     
    #316 Keir117, Jan 9, 2011
  17. @stora hopefully this won't mean you'll kill my character off on atlantric?
     
    #317 Keir117, Jan 9, 2011
  18. Lmao
     
    #318 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  19. Cut my thumbs off eh irin a bit harsh now
     
    #319 Keir117, Jan 9, 2011
  20. Rofl
     
    #320 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
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