@Saron, thanks. I hope things get better for you. Thanks guys! Could you tell I was hungrey when I wrote that? Anyway, working on the next post. It should be up soon-ish.
Nice new chapter.... Except the fact that you called it a "thrown room." Literally, it means a room that somebody threw. Wonderous. I believe the word was "throne room?" :lol: :mrgreen: iZaln :mrgreen:
Well, you never know. Maybe it's one of those ancient rooms built somewhere else and someone used magic to throw it. Alright, lame excuse. But gimmie a break. I'm about as tired as Irin! The fact that I got anything up at all is miraculous.
I know. I'm sorry then, I mean i just Lced and now i have to work on my story. Idk what you feel like, but i can write a whole book! Lmfao. Anyway great job sister. Now to find where my thrown room went.... iZaln
Well same thing happened here between me and my classmate Daniel Rubino but I don't like saying his full name at all so yah just life is life u have to move on but it's hard for me to do that
The next chapter is up! Please enjoy this extra long, super confuseing, eyepatch twisting, mind blowing, sword shattering chapter of innocence!
Thanks Seth! @Zaln, well what did you think? Niri, irin and blue-eyes were going to have a thanksgiving feast on a cliff? Sheesh, I can't seem to please you. And what about Niri shushi giri? Sushie? What does that have anything to do with it? Anyways...I'm curious. Did you guys really think I killed off Niri in the middle of the post?
A hint at cussing there my dear Good chapter, but not one of your best no offense. It lacked the smooth flow of words that ive come to expect from you . Duel scenes don't seem to be one of your strengths unfortunately, but talk to Zaln, he's a master at it.
No, I think it was what I needed. I've always been terrible at battle scenes. And romance scenes. I just read the chapter over again, and I see the parts where it got awkward with the wording. Thanks for the feedback! So anyway, how was turkey day?