You need to write something new, Col. Fan fic needs someone to show em how it's done! Rika, sounds fun. Better than here. My nook is broken...=(
I've been busy trying to catch up on what I've been missing out from, some of these are pretty spectacular
Col, just take some time to think it through. Innocence, horrible thought the beginning was, had no real plot to it until the middle-ish. Actually, it still only has a very vague plot, but don't tell anyone. Don't rush and throw a good story out by a mistake.