The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Reg looks at Keir, and all she says is "Irin isn't gonna be happy about that hole..."
     
  2. *wakes up*
    I'm sure she'll live...
     
  3. "When did you fall asleep?" asks Reg.
     
  4. When i looked at the clock 

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    my names David so I'm going bk to 1st person lol
     
  5. out

    idk y but we hav to write in 3rd person or else somebody will scream at us about how we need to know the proper format :lol:

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  6. Keir jumps bolt upright and the strangest words popped out of his mouth. " that bloody monkey pressed the wrong button!!!"
     
  7. He then proceeded to fall right back into unconsciousness
     
  8. Redelle tilts her head and crosses her arms, brushing away a lock of tousled blonde hair as she does so.
     
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    sugar plums... But fine
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    "Planet of the apes fan?" asks David.
     
  10. Out-

    Not quite

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  11. David laughs quietly to himself
     
  12. A sudden light covers the room and you see riddle fighting a man In purple. "Here?" riddle asks. "no" the man says. Another flash of light and there gone.
     
  13. "Nooo!" wailed Reg. "You're lieing! I can sense it!" Reg points accusingly at the newcomer. "The monkey didn't press the wrong button! YOU DID!"
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  14. A monkey slowly saunters into the cafe looking pleased with himself. And laughs quietly at the man lying on the floor
     
  15. Reg waves excitedly to the monkey. "HI MONKEY!!!"
     
  16. Redelle opens her mouth. "This is quite odd," she says quietly.
     
  17. Out

    I am odd.

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  18. The monkey waves dismissively to reg and says to keir " I didn't press the wrong button just not the one you expected me to press
     
  19. David just picks up his lute a strums a few chords