The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Watches the fight.
     
  2. Can I join? I got nothing to do
     
  3. David stops in his tracks, the scream bringing back a name.... Juliana
     
  4. "You know what to do," she says to David. They had done this ritual thousands of times in their other lives... She still couldn't overcome the shock that their paths had crossed once again.
     
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    Do you know the plot?
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  6. Redelle stops struggling for a moment to witness the spectacle.
     
  7. Not at all lolwut
     
  8. "hm." caliber whispers.
     
  9. Reg gapes at David. "No! It can't be her!" Reg is hysterical, even though deep inside... she knew...

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    juliana could be the extra character we control lol
    irin controls herself, alex, and liz, y shouldnt we hav juliana? lol

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  10. David takes his katana and bites his thumb, making a steady flow of blood, he runs his finger along the blade turning it red. "you won't be need this time reg" David tells her
     
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     hey ppl if u want to know a bit bout juli read my fourm "the way the wind blew" it's only a little but it's something

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  12. "Are you sure that isn't too much?" she asks, biting her lip. "You know we need the perfect amount... not enough could do nothing, but too much can make her more powerful..." Reg takes a dagger, cuts her arm and doesn't even wince, and a single drop of blood falls on LumiBlade.
     
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    lol i thought she was just a name for "her" lol is she the same juliana or just has the same name?
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    What exactly is the plot? Does this go along with a story or show or... I was just playing along the whole time so...
     
  15. Regs woun heals in a second and the blood lands on David's katana "I said it's fine" David whispers
    David stands up to face the light, he un-does his cloak reveling his naked torso... He lifts the katana and plunges it into his chest.... "count to 5 then you know the rest" David says inbetween screams
     
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    just go with the flow 

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    there was a spirit taking over lady, now theres a compromise, then i tirned into a spirit, dont feel like explaining how, and now i hav a new body, i will explain y wen star lady and irin r here. now we just improvising lol

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    Okay then
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  19. Reg counts to five, Then she takes off her necklace. she stops for a moment, remembering all the necklace had caused and fixed... then she stops herself. *No,* she thinks. *I need to focus. We only have seconds left*
    She puts the necklace around David's neck. The necklace glows and David's body dissapears. She puts the necklace back on herself, and she shudders. She grows twice her size, suddenly, and becomes stronger. With David's spirit to aid her, she knows she can do it.
    Suddenly, she lets out a bloodcurdling scream as the tip of a blade comes out of her stomach...
    She was too late... The ritual had been interupted...
    With her last breaths, she screamed "KILA BET SUDA!"
    The light dissapears, and everything goes back to normal.
    The last thing Reg sees is Juliana herself, cursing as she dissapears.
    "Atleast we stopped her... for now..." thinks Reg, then she sinks to her knees and passes out... or maybe she's dead...
     
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    lol, thats the most interesting and dramatic thing i have done here, if i do say so myself. Even wen i lost my body it wasnt so dramatic and awesome :lol:

    i hope i survive though... i think lady GlooMi or Irin have to save me

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