The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Dang, Must have deleted when I cleaned out my hardrive to make room for Starcraft 2. I did find a ton of poetry...
     
  2. U don't know ww more people like things than u know they don't post though
     
  3. Alright, that's it. Poetry night has officially been moved to Friday this week.
     
  4. Okay, Innocence preview in 3...2...1...

    I was hoping that he would recall what I said about Arabella. 

    And I was hoping he would tell me the truth.

    Though, I had my own ways of seperating the truth and the lies.

    Seth took off his helm, revealing what he had been hiding, probably since before I even saw him.
     
  5. Yay innocence chapter(by the way ww I love all storys so umm no bad reviews from me..)
     
  6. This is the short prologue to my upcoming story, The Journey.

    I thought I was dreaming. I wish I was because I didn't recognize anything around me. The sun has disappeared over the horizon leaving the blackness in it's place above my head. I knew I was lost and with little supplies. A water bottle and a small lunch packed neatly in a little satchel and the clothes on my back was all I had. The only thing to guide me was the stars. I was heading north, where I hoped I could find shelter and civilization.



    Tell me what you think.
     
  7. Irin, I NEED MOAR!!!!

    btw if you wanna see the poetry, I revived coloial's poetry thread in the off topic section.
     
  8. Sounds awesome irin, I have been waiting 4 the next chapter too
     
  9. @W, it's very intresting. I'd like to hear more. Your off to a good start.
     
  10. Well...I could post half I'd the chapter...but, I think it'll be better when completed.
     
  11. Um, wat do u think?
     
  12. Np, W.

    Ima go get one of my poems, the newest one.
     
  13. Awsome ww!!!
     
  14. I just wrote this one on Monday...at least I think it was Monday...



    I'll Love You Forever

    Don't ever forget, what you said to me, 
    On the day we first kissed, by the trunk of our tree,
    You said that you'd love me, year after year,
    You said that you loved me, and that was my fear.

    Commitment had scared me, mistakes of my past.
    But you said our love was one that would last.
    And I loved you so deeply, I had to believe, 
    So I helped make our goal, one we could achieve.

    We married four years, right after that day.
    "I'll love you forever," is what you still say.
    And year after year, that promise you keep,
    From when we awake, to when we both sleep.

    But time had to pass, we were over the hill,
    "I'll love you for always," is what you say, still.
    You smiled your smile, and my eyes had shone,
    And for so many years, I was never alone.

    Then one rainy day, in a hospital bed,
    "You know I still love you," is what you had said.
    "I'll meet you in heaven, and thanks for the ride.
    I'll love you forever. I'll be at your side."
     
  15. @irin, k cya in a min

    @Matt, thanks, what did u like about it?
     
  16. That's...wow...I can't find words to explain that one irin
     
  17. Thanks...i think...?

    I love writing poetry. It's one of the things that just 'clicks' with me.
     
  18. U wrote that, that's an awesome poem