The Writer's Café

[*riddleteller (01)]

"I would help but I don't fight." riddle says.

 

[Starwars6374]

"You may want to watch out. If she is nearby, we don't know who's in control." Star comments.

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

"ok" riddle mutters.

 

[Starwars6374]

"They have both left." He said Simply.

 

[lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII]

Reg's thoughts suddenly filled the room. "My mind hurts! I've been singing for over an hour, to practice for audtioning in a play tomorrow! I don't know how I'll audition without a body, though," she sighed.

out

i really hav been singing for over an hour my throught hurts i never watched or read annie and thats wat the play is i hav only today to memorize a song and im a TERRIBLE singer im hoping to make up for my terrible singing with effort


in

 

[Starwars6374]

I guess you can't do much physically now. Is there even a way to restore your physical body?

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

.......

 

[Starwars6374]

Star puts the table back up and resets it.

"Where'd everyone go?" Star asked, especially wondering about Lady and Irin.

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

"yep"

 

[Starwars6374]

-Out-

I may or may not be back later on tonight. I'll check but probably won't be back.

-In-

 

[*Caliber (02)]

"what did I miss?" caliber asks.

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

"nothing much" riddle says.

 

[Delphin]

With a look of confusion Delphin's eyes sweep the room. His voice barely audible he asks. "Wha-what's going on here?"

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

"nothing at all." says riddle.

 

[Delphin]

"Hmm. So...what be the point of this thread?" inquired a curious Delphin.

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

"who knows" riddle says.

 

[Delphin]

"Perhaps a place for enthused writers to get help from others, a place where.....oh screw it.

Why are we talking in 3rd person?


Also, try not to use said for everything. It makes the reader bored easily.

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

Out

Delphin I think they want to pratice wrighting in third person.

In

 

[Delphin]

Ahhh......practice make perfect!

 

[*riddleteller (01)]

Writing*