The Writer's Café

"I would help but I don't fight." riddle says.

 

"You may want to watch out. If she is nearby, we don't know who's in control." Star comments.

 

"ok" riddle mutters.

 

"They have both left." He said Simply.

 

Reg's thoughts suddenly filled the room. "My mind hurts! I've been singing for over an hour, to practice for audtioning in a play tomorrow! I don't know how I'll audition without a body, though," she sighed.

out

i really hav been singing for over an hour my throught hurts i never watched or read annie and thats wat the play is i hav only today to memorize a song and im a TERRIBLE singer im hoping to make up for my terrible singing with effort


in

 

I guess you can't do much physically now. Is there even a way to restore your physical body?

 

.......

 

Star puts the table back up and resets it.

"Where'd everyone go?" Star asked, especially wondering about Lady and Irin.

 

"yep"

 

-Out-

I may or may not be back later on tonight. I'll check but probably won't be back.

-In-

 

"what did I miss?" caliber asks.

 

"nothing much" riddle says.

 

With a look of confusion Delphin's eyes sweep the room. His voice barely audible he asks. "Wha-what's going on here?"

 

"nothing at all." says riddle.

 

"Hmm. So...what be the point of this thread?" inquired a curious Delphin.

 

"who knows" riddle says.

 

"Perhaps a place for enthused writers to get help from others, a place where.....oh screw it.

Why are we talking in 3rd person?


Also, try not to use said for everything. It makes the reader bored easily.

 

Out

Delphin I think they want to pratice wrighting in third person.

In

 

Ahhh......practice make perfect!

 

Writing*