The Writer's Café

"Well you might want to fine tune your senses. It's not bad, but it's not good either. Lady has kept the spirit from taking control, but she can't really do much else. THis effort is taking all of her concentration. Any loud noises or surprises could break her will and she will once again lose control of her body."
 
"I hope so," Reg's mind said "'Cuz I knew the consequences of giving away my necklace, and I miss my body..."


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i sitll cant decide between 2 explanations
by consequences, I meant what would happen to me! the necklace isnt doing anything bad to lady!!! either helping or doing nothing

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"I don't have a body!" said Reg's mind


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which story should i choose???


a: I never had a body, and I am just a spirit, and a magician gave me the necklace so that I can have a body, and the necklace is part of me and part of my essence.

B: The necklace has some of my life power in it and it's part of me and my essence.

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GlooMi rolled her eyes. "Giving her more physical essence isn't going to help her at all. What she needs is spiritual essence, the essence of the mind."
 
"The necklace doesn't only give physical essence," said Reg. "It contains part of my mental essence, to help her fight the spirit. I know physical essence is useless for her in this situation. If we take the necklace off, the spirit might overpower her."
 
Through what seems like a thick layer of fabric lady hears: "So GlooMi, can you turn people into toads?" she hears this and can't stop herself from laughing. The spirit begins taking over again.

"GlooMi! You said talking it was the best way, Talk to..." Lady's voice trails off as the spirit takes full control.
 
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