It's supposed to be a kindof weird part of the story. Anyways, expect me to be resuming my schedule of posting a part once every one or two days.
Two things; 1) Part twelve is soon 2) Marlins, go and tell the others that Im writing the story again. Thanks!
Cheese do you know the secret to writing? READ! read like you've never read before! Soak your eyes in the marble black ink of a story! You will never regret reading. I may sound like a second grade English teacher, but you have to understand: learn from others' work.
That's how I'm writing, but if you want me to dosomething differently, just ask. Luther, Horren and the others are not forgotten. Don't lose your hopes. Oh, and Chris... Your characte is.... Who?
Cheese try to write like real authors: when there is dialogue they do this "Blah blah blah blah," said blah. "Blah blah blah blah"
"Write like the real authors," Hidden commanded. "But it gets monotonous, and this writing style is used by some of the worlds most famous authors!" Cheese replied. "Well, Im gonna post a reply soon to go against that," Hidden retaliated. Meh, it just seems... Boring. LOL
I've read a few of those 700pagers. A story doesn't have to have "he said" or "they replied" after every single dialogue. Thtas how you keep it from being monotonous.
Well, write how you will; I'm not going to push it on you. I posted my story if you would like to read it