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Idk actually

 

NICE CHAPTER!!!

 

Great chapter!

 

It was colonel mustard in the dining room with the lead pipe is that who killed Xander?

 

Liking this chapter!!

 

On and off about to post next chapter

 

For my story of course not zaln's 

 

Idk zaln just felt like being random. Haven't u ever played Clue

 

Nope, I'm pretty sure it was mr. Green in the study with the frying pan. Yes, frying pan

 

Story up really excited

 

Neghh!!!!! You cut it off to soon! Left us hanging, though that's what you probably meant to do.... Can't wait for next chapter

 

Was it not Cro with the throwing knife in the bathroom?

 

I'm afraid not

 

Hey zaln, rlly like the story. And as I said my character can b male if u want. Not much to change. Anyway, ur writing is AMAZING!! a suggestion, describe the places a bit more. Like the villages and settings. That helps with the little things.

 

Noooooooo! Don't describe places more! I like to exercise my imagination!

 

More please.
Seth