"Dragon Fire" Feedback, Discussion, etc.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Nov 21, 2010.

  1. Lmao, Seth. You're so calm. "More please."

    Lmfao, you just say it so plainly. Haha, that made my night for no reason at all. And I see you still continue you single enter space signature .

    iZ
     
  2. Your welcome?
    Seth
     
  3. Here, idk if this is the rite place to put this, but I'm putting the mal version of the character I gave u.

    Name: Pyralis (pie-ral-is)
           Race: half human half elf
           Gender: male
           Description: slightly tan skin; one eye is bright emerald green, the other is a solid fire red (not necessary); ears r only slightly pointed; dark leather pants; usually a mottled green shirt; dark sleeve on right arm with "hobo" cut off fingertips (this sleeve is glove-like); short, kinda spiky hair, the wild "Harry potter never-stays-down" kind of style; u can pick the color; very athletic; slim muscle; fast and sneaky; can hide almost anywhere; no shoes; 
           Weapon: double swords. Red hilt/handle. Fit together to form one sword. Can take apart/put together anytime. Both have string/strap at end. Holds in cross shape across back, or can put on both hips. Sheath is leather. Nice, fallen-star metal.
           Personality: kind of shy. Doesn't like to mix with others much. Good fighter. A spy, can sneak up on most anyone. An amazing actor. Understands nature. Knows most healing herbs. Isn't afraid to help others, but usually tries to do so anonymously. Fierce, loyal, understanding, and kind only to those that know him. Carves figures in wood and leaves them randomly around. Hates his parents because they brought him so much pain. A loner mostly. Ran away when young and can survive on his own. Despises those who try to figure him out or get him to talk about herself. Will only do those things (or let them happen) on his own.

    (you can change any of this)
     
  4. I am in agreement with seth. More please.
     
  5. Damn why is everyone either an elf or half human/elf I is the only human I is lonely
     
  6. Zaln and Kyle are humans. And Blaze, wrong thread. And thank you Lady_Marian, but I'm going to be in the Philippines for most of December so I won't be very active.

    iZaln
     
  7. But 3 outta...........a bunch not great odds man
     
  8. Srry, I wasn't sure. Anyway, again, u can change him anyway u want. Tho elves, in my opinion, r way kwlr than humans, he can b human if necessary
     
  9. [color/blue] [size/200] Awesome story zaln [/color] [/size]
     
  10. [color/blue] [size/200] awsome story zaln [color/] [size/]
     
  11. I can't get it to work
     
  12. That's all right, mate. I got the message lol. Thanks .

    iZaln
     
  13. I luv this story zaln
     
  14. Lolz thanks. Still gotta find time to type the next chapter. And storyboarding... Ugh lol. I don't wanna make the story move to fast but then again, the concept is real good. Idk lol.

    iZ
     
  15. Sup zaln it's fangon. Took some time of KAW for school and I'm back and I haven't seen you. Good to see you here. Hear from you soon.

    Remember the old days lol

    good times
     
  16. FANGON!!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN (I know, I read it)??? DUDUDUDUDUDE, it's been way to long!

    iZaln
     
  17. Bump now that I have a new laptop.

    iZaln
     
  18. ZALN! Haven't seen you in forever! How was vacation?!?


    And also....write more soon please.



    I said please. That means you have to.