Criticize My Writing

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Blau_Engel, Nov 5, 2015.

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  1. It is very well written. Some of the phrasing is slightly unnatural, but this is barely noticeable.
     
    #41 Crewl, Nov 6, 2015
  2. Thank you ^~^
     
    #42 Blau_Engel, Nov 6, 2015
  3. 50 Shades of KaW
     
    #43 PrestonGarvey, Nov 6, 2015
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