Broken: Feedback/Misc. Disscussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011.

  1. Eeeehhhhhhhh... Maybe I'll copy/paste it onto a word document rather than reading it on an iPod... Then again I probably won't... Sorry irin
     
  2. I have an idea to make her read it:

    Tomorrow, if she doesn't I hit her once.
    The next day would be 2x attacks.
    Day 3 would be 4x
    Day 4 would be 8x
    and so on...
     
  3. I guess it's okay Marian. Somethings might just be confusing, but I guess it's okay.
     
  4. Lol, that's kinda cruel, star.
     
  5. I know. I was just kidding. Besides, Day 7 would be 64x and Day 14 would be 8192x. Way more than I could manage.
     
  6. Nice job. And what r u guys talkin about?

    iZaln
     
  7. Encouraging Lady-Marian to read Innocence. But I don't want to attack 8192 times in one day.
     
  8. Lol. I guess Lady will just have to figure out the puzzle of the extrordinary eye patch man by herself. And she will never understand Irin and Renethon. And don't get me started on the sixth sense! Or the seven stones!
     
  9. Hey Zaln! and thanks!

    We're plotting our next evil scheme for world domination. Wait...you weren't supposed to hear that.
     
  10. Name: Esoram "Eso" Fridiom
    Gender:Male
    Age:15
    Race: 3/4 Elf, 1/4 human
    Appearance: Tall and thin with wispy brown hair and dreamy green eyes. Has a few freckles splashed across his nose.
    Personality: Quiet, shy, yet incredibly smart. He will take any challenge that requires mental fortitude. He also has an incredible talent for logistics.
    Bio: Esoram is the bastard son of a slave girl hafling (elf and human) and the great warlord Rathuak Amo'ad. To appease his wife, Rathuak sent Esoram to battle, guessing that the fragile boy would be sent straight to the war as battle fodder and not utilized for his strategical talent. He was correct in his assumption and Esoram was sent straight into battle on the front lines where he was saved by Irin.
    Misc. He loves Owls more than any other animal and can call them to his fist. He also is an expert at creating battle strategies although he has little experience. He enjoys wearing fluffy clothing, and is kind to all people, particularly servants and slaves.
     
  11. The ******* is the word Bast.ard
     
  12. Intresting...I like it!
     
  13. Me 2 and Irin i swear THIS THREAD WASNT HERE 10 MINS AGO
     
  14. Irin it's great! I actually clicked on it by accident, but when I saw what it was, I was like, "Oh my gosh I've been looking for this!"
     
  15. I thought irin and that one person we bro and sis
     
  16. Maybe niris lying just to get irin to do it:0
     
  17. could I try making character?