Broken: Feedback/Misc. Disscussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011.

  1. YAY!!!!!! It's kinda like a poem this chapter, how it repeats(like the last chapter too)
     
  2. So most of it was flashbacks? How long did it take to get them all?
     
  3. Thanks Stora, and yeah, I didnt notice how it was like a poem.

    @Star, not very long. Mostly because almost none of it was word for word. Only the short exchange between Irin and Niri at the beginning of the dream was exactly how I wrote it a year ago. The rest I just remembered and put into my own words. I also added a bit right after Niri gave Irin a glimpse of the future.
     
  4. YYYYYYAAAAYYYYY broken is back
     
  5. There's a Legend told far and wide about a portal that links to another world, the world where the human Seth came from. Supposedly established when an earthquake happened in both worlds, this portal is the only link between the two worlds: a world of mid-evil magic and wars, and the world you call 'Earth.'

    Over two-hundred years have passed since the elf called Irin last visited this world. Though it is a world that lacks magic, it is a world filled with science, and in these last few hundred years technology has revolutionized the once primitive world.

    So this is my question for you, the readers and writers of KaW. Should Irin travel to the world of humans? Or stay within the boundaries of her own world?





    Please vote here. While your votes will be taken into consideration, I do have my on ideas, so what might have the most votes won't necessarily be put into the story. I'd also like to know why you voted the way you did. Thanks for your time,

    -Irin
     
  6. I say input one of the gems on top of Mnt Everest of something
     
  7. Is something wrong?
     
  8. Yup the story is sad:p
     
  9. Definitely enter land of the humans p.s. How long is the story??
     
  10. Innocence and broken have some of the longest forum posts ive ever seen
     
  11. poor Irin..(the character) but nice post :)
     
  12. Sorry I've not posted for awhile. Ill try and get more up soon.
     
  13. Finally added something!
     
  14. YEA!!!!!!


    Hehe I'm overenthusiastic
     
  15. Thanks guys! I should have the next chapter up before the night ends.
     
  16. Yep. You're screwed 