Battle camp: the enemy feedback

Page turn. I'm glad I'm back too.

 

Ok. I liked your chapter and I decides to post it when I'm done with the Atlantis Complex.

 

HOLY CRAP! SHE'S PREGNANT! ( if talon didn't know bout it I wonder who's the father)

 

Lololol I joke too

 

Wolf has a dagger, but I respect him not doing much, I would like him to keep a low profile

 

Lol that was funny

 

What do you mean fanged?And lady I looove it your like my fave writer besides fanged and ari

 

Oh you mean fighting yeah that was a good fight

 

You army getting criticism bc it's so good... Literally if you wrote this a little longer and book style I can see it being published.... I would read it

 

It's true I've read hundreds of books nearing thousands and this book is not the worst book I've read that's published in fact it's probobly in the middle or the top of the middle and I've read a lot of really really good books

 

Umm I would read it if it were in a paper book ;-D

 

Not that I don't readi t know it's just... You get the point

 

Yeah!

 

Yes
waiting is painful