Battle camp: the enemy feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 2, 2010.

  1. You'll have what?
     
  2. I will describe how Quick you are
     
  3. Oh okay cuz with the ar I didn't understand
     
  4. I like the book start writing soon
     
  5. Kk, I'll try! I allready posted 2 chapters today, so I might no write any more unless a REALLY good idea comes up!
     
  6. Lol I can't wait until we find out who talon is lolz
     
  7. Write more please I was getting into it
     
  8. I don't know why but I can't stop laughing, nothing is even funny!
     
  9. I never get any critism! 
     
  10. It's so awful...













































    That's it's soo awesome (keep writing)
     
  11. Lol irin! In a story i'm writing, you are a character!
     
  12. I mean lost rebel! you r not a character, but I thought u were irin sorry!
     
  13. It's awesome
     
  14. New awesome chapter! What do you think?
     
  15. Loooooooooooved it!!!
     
  16. Hey, new chapter, what did u think?
     
  17. It's great. I like the humor in it b
     
  18. Thanks, Kimber, I'm glad ur back!