Viper you don't need to ask for critiques on your lyrics,just be like me (if you can) I've always thought myself to be the very best in this thread #Fvanity
Not very wise to call out the greatest My advice to you would be to save it... cuz aint no way you could replace this Ya raps tasteless and lacking all patience how do you intend to compete & win with, incompetent raps, like the hand that pens it? every time you write, its too extensive too long;didnt read... or pay attention! a hot 16s all you need on this thread I pop 16 like a fiend of a friend 16 in the clip, but 15 at ya head so 15 is for fun cuz only 1 leave ya dead RIP Viper, leaking brains out his fitted cap for tryin to rap when Stat had invented that! Its a lyrical drive-by in a tinted Lac You lived once, I died twice. Imagine that! So even if I snatch ya life, I might give it back!
Static and yolo's vocabulary comes from nowhere...... I don't know what they're talking about those things xD just reading the ones I knew :lol:
[quote="-Static-] every time you write, its too extensive too long;didnt read... or pay attention![/quote] HAHA
yea thats what I meant. lol. Usually only trolls will actually put tl;dr, and Viper wanted to write longer verses, so figured Id troll my own verse and tell him that his was too long to read. Glad you liked that bar! I like it too. lol.
cant tell me nothin bout the streets and runnin from police nothin bout some beef or bussin the heat! cant tell me nothin bout them hoes when erbody done hit it and still braggin to ya folks that you finally did get it! Cant tell me nothin bout coke nothin bout losing hope nothin bout a M1 when 5-0 pinup ya bro! Cant tell me bout undercover surveillance and detectives Cant tell me **** bout safes having crates full of weapons! Cant tell us bout music cant tell us **** about airplay beats from stairway to airway my street heavy on airwaves! cant tell us nothin bout dirty cops nothin bout thirty glocks tell me bout gang wars and Ill show you the perfect spot! Cant tell me nothin bout nothin and nothin bout somethin nothin bout crunkin, and nothin bout subs in the trunk thumpin
Wow you actually know about mobb deep Northlane never thought you listen to rap like that, lol but good eye on it though
I had to use this name, it's such a dope name (get it? Lol) and he's one of my favorite rappers of one of my favorite rap groups
*puts my dollar on the table* to anyone taking the bets defeat me if ur able either way, I got next! Ive been sitting over here for awhile, watching ya play. And lemme make 1 thing clear today is the day that you pay! Your raps maintain a lil muscle but its survival of the fittest I see you rappers on ya hustle but Static bout to go get it! Come at me with your hardest but you better brave the dark! Cuz anything not the smartest will leave a stake in your heart! You a vampire and Im just blade killin is me, making a livin so slumber in your grave all day either way, pain and death Im givin.
So you claiming that you blade now Cuz you killed a couple of posers Blood suckers but not vampires These undead sure to be decomposers These has beens that lack passion And enough wits to becoming pros are Sure to be fallin fast now That these verses quench thirst like the Ozarks Naturally talented, verbally gifted I'm spiritually guided but mentally twisted My venom is toxic but sort of addictive Like Pringles you can't stop When I get these hooks into it One taste of this magic One bite of my poison Have you beggin like H in your veins Like you rehabbing from roidin Feeling weaker and angry Missing the buzz and that feelin Til you hearing my next verse drop And your heart hits the ceiling Try to deny it You missed me it's that obvious No no don't you lie to me now That mess getting obnoxious Go ahead and start with the comebacks I can see through it like glad wrap So transparent your weak lines are now To those of us that rap Missing the motivation And drive to write real lyrics Try to tell me I'm wrong static You can try but I won't hear it
Faggots beat me off Quicker than I unzip my mother f***ing zipper. My Zodiac is swag You are lame My sign says your mom is my game I sweep you off of your feet Your rhyme are gay Fat people hate is based in the USA I just burnt your house down Just reading my lyrics is fire. People grab me by the shoulder because I rap like a boulder -*Drops the mic*-
My raps are homosexual Yet you want me to do what now? Did you read the lyrics you just spit Before you submit what you wrote down? Wow dude that came off half cocked But I guess that makes sense doesn't it Your raps are just like you are Well I guess that covers it Yeah that just about does it That slayed you quite easily I'd stick around longer Humiliate you its feasibly Possible to do one handed With half of my brain cells The inside of a tuna fish can Is better than your mom smells And since you came out of that mess I guess that it stains well Cuz your face looking red right now Like constipation that strains well I hope you don't take this mess literally Like I'd actually care about you I think that you might need help You're starting to stare. I doubt you Can rub two sentences together Without using a curse word Expand your vocabulary kid Or come back here and get served