World of War

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  1. hapter 9 
    "We should probably start packing up. I saw a vessel landing zone not far from here but there is only one problem". Jason said. "What is that problem?" Rise asked. "Well" Jason explained "We would need to sneak past the Tri units.". Morgana looked even more worried then before. "The good thing is is that there are slot of trees and piles of leaves we can use to stay hidden" I said. After we got ourselves together, Morgana handed us all knives. Then we went out not knowing what awaits us.

    After an hour of walking around the thick blue landscape, we has a small glimpse of the Tri units. There were almost 50 regular Tri units and there was 1 unit which did not look like a Tri unit. He had small bombs all over his body and on his helmet was painted "Tri Boomer". Rise whispered to me when the group came closer "Hey I recognize the bombs on the boomer. They are called 100x bombs. They have they power to blow up anything". I looked over to Morgana and Rhea but I couldn't find Jason. The Tri's started to pass us 1 by 1. We waited for a couple of minutes and I looked behind me. There was only 4 tri units and the boomer. I knew that this was a good time to get some extra protection by taking there weapons. I gave a small hand signal to Morgana and we all took out our knives. I looked back once more and chose my target, the boomer.  I gave a rushing signal to Rhea, Morgana, and Rise. I counted to 3 in my head and I got my knife ready. 

    I instantly got on my feet and I charged at the boomer. He had quick reflexes and dodged my stabbing motion. I quickly glanced at my team and they were stabbing their targets. Then Rise moved to the fifth target and I was still stuck on mine. This time I tried a slicing movement but he countered by twisting my wrist. There was a crack and I dropped the knife "Ugghhhahhhh!" I yelled in pain. He punched me in the stomach and I bent over. I didn't scream but I spat out blood. I grabbed my broken wrist and tried to kick the boomer. He tripped me and picked up my knife. I could see the glory in his dark eyes. I looked at my team and they stood, frozen. The boomer moved his arm backwards winding up to stab. I knew that out of all the times I cheated death I could not get out of this. All of a sudden a large blade was in the boomers chest and his eyes opened wide. The blade went out of his chest and behind the boomer was Jason! "I thought you could use a little help" Jason said proudly. 
    Rise came to me and helped me up. Rhea bent down and picked up some of the 100x bombs. 

    We continued our way through the never-ending forest. Finally after 30 more minutes of walking we saw an abandoned outpost with a large vessel parked in the open. "We made it" Morgana said with disbeilef "After this long time we made it.". We made our way to the vessel, and that's when we heard it. 
     
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  3. Chapter 10 The final chapter 
    There was a large boom and the ground shook. He looked around and saw off in the distance a cloud of smoke right above a mountain. 
    Rise looked panicked and I wasn't quite sure why until Morgana yelled. 
    "Is that...lava?" morgana asked. 
    We looked to where she was looking and a think, steaming, silver liquid was running down the mountain. Rise nodded, in fear. 
    The lava was inching it's way towards us at top speed. We knew we would have to leave soon. 
    "Go, Go, Go into the vessel!" Rise commanded. We piled into the vessel with moments to spare and went into the sky. 
    "That was close" I said. Rhea peered out her window. 
    "Uh...is that normal?" Rhea asked. We all rushed to her window and saw rocks flying out of the volcano. Most of the rocks were flying in our direction but all were near misses. 
    "Should we...try and stop it?" Rise asked. 
    The rest of us were puzzled. There was no way we could plug up that volcano. 
    "How the the hell would we be able to do that?!" Jason asked from the cockpit. 
    Rise dug deep in his many pockets and pulled out something I didn't expect. He pulled out a 100x bomb that was on the boomer. 
    "If I aim this correctly, I think we can shut it up." Rise said. 
    "So were going near the volcano!?" Jason screamed. 
    "I'm afraid so." Rhea said.
    Jason brought the vessel closer to the volcano while dodging the many flying debris. He circled around for a bit until he found a good spot to hover. 
    "Alright you better do this fast or we are going to get hit!" Jason yelled. 
    I opened the door for Rise and he brought out the bombs. Morgana was sitting and hoping for the best and Rhea was watching out for any flying debris. Rise leaned out of the door and planted his feet hard on the edge of the hatch. Rise flicked the switch on the bombs and was about to drop them. "Rock!" Rhea yelled. Jason jolted the vessel to the left and it rocked back and forth. Rise went unstable and lost his footing causing him to fall off the vessel. "Rise!" Rhea screamed in absolute horror. She swiftly grabbed Rise's open hand. 
    Rise dangled back and forth and desperately tried to hang on. He put the active bombs into his pocket and looked at me. 
    "I...I want you to have this". He grabbed what looked like a necklace and tore it away from his neck. He handed it toward me with his other hand. 
    I looked near my feet and saw a few rocks inside, and I looked back at Morgana since, she had been very quiet. Her head was hanging down, and there was a jagged stone in the back of her head. I wasn't sure what to do, stay and help Rise in or see how bad Morgana's condition is. I decided that I would quickly check up on Morgana. 
    I ran to her side, the stone wasn't in too deep but it was bleeding a lot. I rushed back to Rhea. I saw she was struggling with Rise, so I stuck my hand out to help Rise up. He gave me a relieved look and he let go of Rhea's desperate hand. "NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO RRIIIISSSSEEEE!!!" Rhea screamed! Rise fell down closer to the volcano. Before he touched the lava the bombs exploded  and we watched in sorrow and disbelief. 
    Jason pulled the vessel out of the planets atmosphere and he set a course to Earth. I went over to Morgana, while Jason comforted Rhea. Morgana's condition worsened, and her bleeding was much more severe. I grabbed a first aid kit and tried my best to help her, but it was no use. I attached a mobile heart monitor and I saw the heart beat drop. I buried my head in my hands and wished this was all over, that Earth never had the war. As I kept thinking, I knew wishing would never get this anywhere, and I knew I had to stop the war. I reached in my pocket and grabbed the only thing that gave me courage. I took out my old army tags on one showed my personal information. On the other showed my favorite quote "I won't back down from anything". Under it said, my courage, my everything, my life, belongs to me, Mas. I glanced at Rhea. She was still shocked, and terrified. I knew that Rhea, Jason, and Morgana would not be afraid to fight but the only thing that stood in the way of ur ending the war....we needed more people, more people to start a rebellion.

                THE END OF PART 1
     
  4. Lmao, 25posts ? o.o
     
  5. I'm just gonna give to you straight, this book sucks, I mean it is so unliterate, poorly written, dictionaryite something ****. I mean god are you 8 or something?
     
  6. Agree with u lion, tho I wouldve worded it differently
     
  7. Couldnt be bothered reading it.
     
  8. i did read the story and i did come accross a few errors but still, dont be so hard on writters they r trying their best
     
  9. I agree just cut em sum slack guys I hate when ppl treat ppl like that how wuld u feel if u took a long time writing something and ppl said they hated it thoght it wuz piece of **** huh