World of War feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010.

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  1. BUUMMMPPPP!!!!!
     
    #161 CrayzJayz, Aug 11, 2010
  2. I ment get the plot moving faster and explain things better to paint a picture in the readers mind
     
    #162 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  3. Bump
     
    #163 CrayzJayz, Aug 12, 2010
  4. 
     
    #164 CrayzJayz, Aug 12, 2010
  5. Bawmp
     
    #165 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 12, 2010
  6. I'm sorry but as the son of a soldier I gotta say, WTF are they using M4's in 3033?
     
    #166 *Gen_Spartan (01), Aug 12, 2010
  7. Cause Earth was never updating the weapons cause they never needed them an once the war started they had no time to update
     
    #167 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 13, 2010
  8. Bump
     
    #168 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 13, 2010
  9. Hey where's the French commander?
     
    #169 *FrancisXVI (01), Aug 13, 2010
  10. There is no French commander
     
    #170 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 13, 2010
  11. So then when did humans stop making weapons?
     
    #171 *Gen_Spartan (01), Aug 13, 2010
  12. The humans tore down factories of the government and the government had to do somthing quick so they had no time to make more weapons
     
    #172 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 13, 2010
  13. Bumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbumpbump
     
    #173 CrayzJayz, Aug 14, 2010
  14. Bump
     
    #174 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 17, 2010
  15. Super bump
     
    #175 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 28, 2010
  16. So when's the next chap. Coming?
    Bump
     
    #176 CrayzJayz, Aug 29, 2010
  17. Woah u changed ur name?
     
    #177 CrayzJayz, Sep 4, 2010
  18. Yeah lol
     
    #178 Chocolate_Milk2, Sep 4, 2010
  19. Next chapter coming soon
     
    #179 Chocolate_Milk2, Sep 4, 2010
  20. Cool
     
    #180 CrayzJayz, Sep 4, 2010
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