World of War feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010.

  1. It's cool good work does the main guy have a name tho?
     
  2. Idea 4 ch7
    they get atkd by security drones and r saved by new character ( maybe Jason?) and his tamed creature
     
  3. I won't reveal his name till the end thoigh
     
  4. Keeps the suggestions coming
     
  5. Maybe a volcano that erupts green lava?
     
  6. Does ne1 know wat bump means?
     
  7. It helps threads go to the top
     
  8. Cool

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  9. Haha I got 2 suggestions from ppl and I need a vote
     
  10. The ppl can either attack an agency outpost so rise can have revenge and introduce that guy with the creature or we can go straight to a vessel and have a volcano erupt!
     
  11. I need 3 votes on an idea to pass it
     
  12. How about they atk an outpost @ a volcano
     
  13. Then there would be a need to att the outpost if the volcano erupted
     
  14. K then I vote atk the outpost
     
  15. ATTACK OUTPOST:1
    GO TO VESSEL:0
     
  16. Also it was crazy that said he wanted a character with a beast right?