World of War feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 8, 2010.

  1. There chapter 8 is posted
     
  2. 
    
    
    
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    
    
    
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    
    
     
  3. 〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰〰
    〰〰〰 ╓╴║╖╓╓╖╥╖╓╓╥╖〰〰〰
    〰 ╟╴║╙╢╙╖║║║║║║〰
     ╙╴╙╙╜╙╜╨╙╜║╨║ 〰
       
      
    
    
     
  4. ➰ ➰ ╭┘└┘└╮
    ➰ ➰ └┐ . • ┌┘
    ╭──╭──┴╮
    ║║ᖱᖱḙR │ o o │
    ║║╥╥╖ ╰┬─┬╯<[|\/|0O]
    ╙╜║╨║ᾰḒאḙŠŠ
     
  5. Z₳₣₮ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟⚫ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟ ͟عʗʟɪㄕšع
    
    
    
     ʐǟʄᏆ ɛƈʟɨքֆɛ 
    
    
    
    
    ϮơϮ Ғǟḉĩèɲḓǻ Ƥąȑʉɱ Ƥḁçṯʊɱ
     
  6. 
    
     
    
    
    
    
    
    
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    
    ρħoεɴίx rίsεs ʃરoɱ asħεs, ιεĢεɴɖs ɴενεર sᎯy ɖίε