Wood Heart-Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by YoDude, Aug 14, 2010.

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  1. Thx Angus!!!!
     
    #21 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  2. Join angus bio's it's a palringo group
     
    #22 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  3. *UPDATE*
    4th chp posted!
     
    #23 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  4. Woo hoo
     
    #24 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  5. Thx Angus
     
    #25 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  6. Can I have permission to tell people to write on feedback?
     
    #26 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  7. Yes angus I give u permission!
     
    #27 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  8. Thx it great so far!!!
     
    #28 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  9. Awesome job!
     
    #29 Porygod, Aug 15, 2010
  10. Thx everyone
     
    #30 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  11. Advitesment***join angus bio's. 10/10 bio's.
    Angus bio's is a palringo group

    Stuff spelling
     
    #31 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  12. *UPDATE*
    I have posted the 5th chp
     
    #32 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  13. Great job on chapter five!
     
    #33 Porygod, Aug 15, 2010
  14. Thx pory
     
    #34 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  15. Good job my characters a wimp....getting beat up by a girl





















































    JK MAN LOVE THE STORY
     
    #35 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  16. Lol thx Bjorn
     
    #36 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  17. Great job again  but it feeling like it going to fast
     
    #37 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 15, 2010
  18. Ur right Angus thx.
     
    #38 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  19. Yeah dude angus I right plots moving a bit too fast



    Either slow it down or space chaps wider
     
    #39 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  20. K
     
    #40 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
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