Wolf Sabre-Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Marodo, Jul 5, 2011.

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  1. Use the return/enter bar. It'll make everything easier to read and the story run more cohesively.
     
    #21 FeatherHunter, Jul 8, 2011
  2. Thx feather, for some reason, it never shows up on my idevice, only on pc.
     
    #22 Marodo, Jul 8, 2011
  3. Like the start of a new paragraph
     
    #23 Marodo, Jul 8, 2011
  4. Do it like this:

    Relyks went out one cloudy day...blah blah blah.

    The guard replied, “Probably a lone piece of blah blah blah.”
     
    #24 FeatherHunter, Jul 8, 2011
  5. Bump

    Thinking about making illustrations 
     
    #25 Marodo, Jul 22, 2011
  6. 
     
    #26 *iPimella (01), Jul 22, 2011
  7. Haha, pimella it seems u rlly like my story
     
    #27 Marodo, Jul 23, 2011
  8. Bump, i added a link on pg 1 so u dont have to surf forums for the story
     
    #28 Marodo, Jul 28, 2011
  9. Moar?
     
    #29 *iPimella (01), Jul 28, 2011
  10. Haha soon, rl soon.

    Pim, u were a fan of my iroleplay idea?
     
    #30 Marodo, Jul 28, 2011
  11. Kinda... I'm not a big RPer, and using safari for RP is no fun. I think palringo is better.
     
    #31 *iPimella (01), Jul 28, 2011
  12. Uh huh,

    Im making iRoleplay on the web now, pal grouo will e remade
     
    #32 Marodo, Jul 29, 2011
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