It's my pet name for you I thought we had enough of a connection to move to the pet name stage of our relationship. It's a term of endearment my little fishy whiskered friend
Uterus Chronicles part 3 Harold Kubrick and i were embarking on an adventure to Ghoul King's castle i looked at the healthy succulent zebra that was walking beside me what is your name my name is Greg but please dont eat me he said I smiled and told him that I wont make any promises greg walked several steps behind me and I looked at the sky only to see a pretty normal moon i looked back at Greg I saw a hamburger screaming in pain as his body began to morph into a power ranger i began to run from him deeper into the forest but he was chasing me until I tripped over a massive satellite Greg had caught up with me and he walked towards me growling ready to use expert kung fu on me I must do something before I eat the zebra I tried to grab my butt I had forgotten that I had left it on the side of my saddle with my batmobile what must I do should I go tell my dade that there is a delicious prey trying to kung fu me or should I just kill myself without getting killed nor being bitten myself because myself being bitten is bad and i wont want myself to get bitten
It needs punctuation and then it'll be good, but otherwise it's improper run-ons which people get annoyed seeing and all the time also even with and you need a coma sometimes anyway.
A coma or two is JUST WHAT we need here...commas would be nice too. Or are some just coming out of comas...? ;-) :-D
Hi Suzanne next story put them all in it ! Let them all be destroyed by the beasts then they wont carry on harrassing and insulting .
To make it easier for us to read the entire story. Means we can enjoy the "literature" as a whole rather than jump from thread to thread.
wings of heart part 3 I looked at the wolf that was trying to kill me and I punched him I ran through the forest towards my father Andrew was gaining on me I had to get away from him I kept running through the forest until I got shot in the leg with an arrow and three men and a woman appeared beside the wolf i passed out due to the pain from the arrow in my leg and I thought to myself am I going to die what do these people want from me and why did they shoot me in the leg with a ******* arrow