Whispering Clouds FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 30, 2011.

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  1. NEXT CHAPTER IS UP!
     
    #21 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 3, 2011
  2. Here you go my lovelies. Next chapter is up!
     
    #22 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 6, 2011
  3. Next chappy up! Sorry for the long wait! But it's worth it!

    •Does Chryorse let Victoria stay?
    •Find out a little more about Lienia.
    •Also, find out a little more about the place where Lienia is. Not too much revealed though!

    ENJOY!
     
    #23 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 9, 2011
  4. Wow go Victoria I love my character exactly who I thought her to be!! Great chapter!
     
    #24 *babygurl2112 (01), Jul 10, 2011
  5. ༄Sweet. Post more lol. I see it's very much your style, Queen! Lol.༄

    iZaln
     
    #25 Nlaz, Jul 10, 2011
  6. Ha I beat u iZaln 2-2
     
    #26 *babygurl2112 (01), Jul 10, 2011
  7. Lol. Thanks, and is ur competition who can post first?
     
    #27 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 10, 2011
  8. Haven't read it in awhile, pretty good but I think it jumps around a bit too much.
     
    #28 Storallelite, Jul 10, 2011
  9. K thanks stora but I don't get what you mean lol
     
    #29 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 10, 2011
  10. I meant between POV's. It go's from one to another to another. All in one chapter.
     
    #30 Storallelite, Jul 10, 2011
  11. Don't worry, I get it. And thanks x
     
    #31 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 10, 2011
  12. ༄Lol our competition is about who reads and posts feedback earlier, me or Michelle haha.༄

    iZaln
     
    #32 Nlaz, Jul 11, 2011
  13. And actually at the moment I'm kicking his ya lol idk if I should say it...but ya and the score is now 3-2 iZaln
     
    #33 *babygurl2112 (01), Jul 11, 2011
  14. Lol k
     
    #34 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 11, 2011
  15. Next chapter is up, sorry for the long wait!!!!
     
    #35 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 12, 2011
  16. 
     
    #36 Storallelite, Jul 12, 2011
  17. ༄Imma liking it! I seem so indecisive... The good thing about your story is that you show what the characters thinking. You show the character's personality with all the mind talk and choices and actions and habits and et cetera. And that's awesome sauce sis! Keep up the great work.༄

    iZaln
     
    #37 Nlaz, Jul 13, 2011
  18. Thanks stora and iZ!!!
     
    #38 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 13, 2011
  19. Great story. I love it. Cant wait to see what happens next.
     
    #39 pingwin1005, Jul 13, 2011
  20. Next chapter up!
     
    #40 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jul 14, 2011
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