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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Sep 26, 2010.

  1. I havent posted here for awhile but i finally got the next chapter up.
     
  2. extremely bored and i know no one will bother to read this but ch 5 is up
     
  3. Great job but where's my dude
     
  4. I sink into the soft what?!? An then sum1 asks me to what the ball?!?
     
  5. Nice! I liked my character!
     
  6. I think it's suppose to be gra$$ and Pa$$
     
  7. Why is grass bleeped out
     
  8. Well it used to b is class bleeped
     
  9. Wierd why was it * it earlier
     
  10. i guess anything that ends in the last 3 letters is bleeped out
     
  11. Grass pass mass glass
     
  12. Wow that's messed up
     
  13. Bump for comments. :(
     
  14. Yay my complaint to the devs worked!
     
  15. Grass glass grass pass
     
  16. Loved it from first word
     
  17. Sorry for the delay, case of writer's block and a lot of editing.
     
  18. This is really good so far. Well written too! Well done Kimber!
     
  19. Yeeaaahh but is my dude in it