"When the Sun Sets," Feedback

@Crazy, thanks! Just double check the spelling on my name next time, lol!

Sorry about the lack of posts. Been busey the last week. Same for this week, but I'll try getting something up.

 

I want to know what you guys are thinking. Can y'all post your predictions??

 

Actually...I have no idea. I'm making this up as I go, lol. But I don't think that's exactly going to happen. By "the girl," do you mean the Director? Or Eve.

 

Alright, so it took about 12 years, but...next part is finaly up!!! 

 

Thanks! xD

 

Thanks!!!

 

Haha, okay, thanks. I'm still not sure where the plot is going though...:-/

 

Bump.

I can't find my story thread...DX

 

Nevermind. Found it.

 

Thanks col. I'm looking forward to more of yours.