@joejava I highly doubt you are younger than me but okay... And I never said you were a boy... There was one death. ONE. I just added that the sister died... I didn't explain anything about it. I'm sorry for your loss, I've had to go through with the fact that my older brother died in Afghanistan war. So don't think you're the only one with problems... And like I said, if YOU don't like it then don't read it and insult me. I'm not going to take someone's advice if other people like my story the way I write it.
I actually really like this story and not everyone can write perfectly and even if they can't the story can still be really good. Keep writing Kate (sorry for your loss)
Joe, please. Piss off. Kate has acquired a name for herself on pimd as an amazing writer, I know several of them read her stories, I quit pimd, and the first thing I asked her was "how'd you end your story." aight?
D_bo: NOT YOU AGAIN. I'm annoyed at how you're pissing off in everyone's thread. First, mine, then Katie's?!?! You've crossed the line. If you have a problem with our storues, make your own, doof.
I have no desire or intent to try and write stories. I have no writing skill. nor would I think it's a productive or entertaining hobby. bottom line. you people can't write. and you're fooling yourselves if you think otherwise
You just said you don't have any writing skill. Then what gives you the right to declare that our storues are bad? Fine, it's your opinion. Just leave. Us. Alone.
just because I cannot sit down and pen my own story doesn't mean I am unable to have an opinion on other peoples writing. from a readers point of view. it SUCKED
Music school? A sibling killed? Not wanting to go to the music school? This is just like Raise Your Voice
Erm... actually her mom died, it's not her sibling anyways, I've quit so people stop giving me **** please!
Katie,; you've talent. I go to writing club every week and i know talent; you've got it i am sorry for your loss, and assassin is just a prig who hasn't got one brain cell to comprehend anything
Ohmuhgod! Stop being a prick, OP! JoeJava was just trying to give you some advice because, like d_bo said, your story sucks. Balls.