Venture - Feedback

Ok I just wanted to let everyone know that wasn't me bumping I learned my lesson from that mess up.

 

._. But stora... We know you are.

 

I'm still not doing anything, however I'm clearly the main protagonist not Winters;
My high levels of activity clearly say "I'm the hero of this story…"
Even though my character is has the quintessence 'evil' job…
:3

 

Heroes have to wear underwear over tights

 

See that's why is signed up to be a merc. Theirs no way I'm wearing that.

 

So mean candi...

 

It might look good on you ;D

 

Dawww. You know I'm kidding </3

 



 

<3 Don't worry Stora... I'm kidding, but...

OMIGOSH STORA'S BIPOLAR! (It's not a bad thing...)

 

Or is it... o.o

 

Getting my hopes up like that...

 

Stop bullying Stora Choco;
Her bipolar has left her in a very fragile state of mind.


Just kidding,
But seriously, we shouldn't mock people with bipolar disorders, they aren't things to make jokes of.

 

I know, I'm kidding. And it's not really a bad thing.

 

But making fun of people who are bipolar is like making fun of people who are dyslexic, or laughing at someone with a deformity.

 

Paradox...
Lol

 

Ik. xP

 

But on the topic of the story, I can feel something evil is going to happen…

 

And then my guy shows up and backslaps evil

Lol haveing read the story it seems i misunderstood the context and it'll be hard to fit him in, if you do at all>_<

 

Love it still!!! Keep me posted. When ur next chapter is posed tell me... some how... lol
Also, question. Your going to incorporate my character right? Its okay if your not.