Vasilias' Feedback Thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Feb 21, 2013.

  1. Ah, ok so only charring the body. Little unclear. Can't wait for what you have in store
     
  2. I edited the prologue; should be up now.
     
  3. Another segment has been posted. I will not be here this weekend, going off to the mountains. I will be posting another section on Monday most likely. Happy KaWing
     
  4. GodMod... why did you post on my thread if I said not to? I will adress your points as I can, as I am somewhat busy at this time.
     
  5. I think I might put the second segment in now actually...
     
  6. Oh ****. Wrong account. :|
     
  7. Nice try, GodMod. Trying to fool people and make them think you're my alt. How long have you been studying my ways of writing.