Truth or Dare

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Capital_4, Jun 8, 2013.

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  1. I read the first line and thought you were going to complain for a whole paragraph so i stopped.
     
    #61 StrictlyProfessional, Jul 7, 2013
  2. they're not kids. They're in high school
     
    #62 Capital_4, Jul 7, 2013
  3. You never said anything about being in high school
     
    #63 Little-One, Jul 7, 2013
  4. That doesn't mean they're like, 12. It'll be revealed in the next few chapters that they are in fact, high schoolers
     
    #64 Capital_4, Jul 7, 2013
  5. From now on plz leave feedback on the feedback thread!
     
    #65 Capital_4, Jul 8, 2013
  6. You should state all of that in the beginning so there is no confusion
     
    #66 Little-One, Jul 8, 2013
  7. Add more, and also I have no ideas
     
    #67 DeathByBeauty, Jul 8, 2013
  8. You've kinda made a mess out of this. Can you write this out, find an editor, group your ideas a bit better, add a LOT more detail, shave out the small errors, and then, and only then, post the story in its entirety? Thanks
     
    #68 Invincible1707, Jul 8, 2013
  9. Well put invincible
     
    #69 Little-One, Jul 8, 2013
  10. Don't give up on writing! Just get the story together
     
    #70 Little-One, Jul 8, 2013
  11. This is horrible,its way too unrealistic....
     
    #71 filterdude, Jul 11, 2013
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