Throned/Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Marodo, Aug 19, 2010.

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  1. Lol not for relyks
     
    #41 Marodo, Aug 23, 2010
  2. Hes pissed, wait until u see what i have planned for relyks tho
     
    #42 Marodo, Aug 23, 2010
  3. Well he can eat his wood and drink his tears while I fly away
     
    #43 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 23, 2010
  4. Lol yea poor kid, hes depressed and he believes that none of this is happening like hes in a dream
     
    #44 Marodo, Aug 23, 2010
  5. Atm they're all only like 12-14
     
    #45 Marodo, Aug 23, 2010
  6. Something I can't get over in ur story






    A guy bumps I to them and gives them all swords randomly wtf! And y they get carriage 4 free?!
     
    #46 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 23, 2010
  7. Right, well the blacksmith fel ba and ull c y he rlly did tht later in the story, free carraige ride bc theyre only a bunch of kids, the guy wouldve felt guilty if he took all their money, ranyin town is a very kind town, most of the time
     
    #47 Marodo, Aug 23, 2010
  8. Yeah lol
     
    #48 *Utho (01), Aug 23, 2010
  9. Brb heade to pal
     
    #49 Marodo, Aug 23, 2010
  10. Well the world has changes from medievil times
     
    #50 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 23, 2010
  11. Lol yup
     
    #51 Marodo, Aug 23, 2010
  12. ok so my email is messing up so I now have a PC account -Utho. instead of Utho. Everything will be the same.

    and the new chapter is posted
     
    #52 *-Utho (01), Aug 24, 2010
  13. Ok cool
     
    #53 Marodo, Aug 24, 2010
  14. Yay! My character is going to appear!
     
    #54 *iPimella (01), Aug 25, 2010
  15. Yup! Hope ya like it!
     
    #55 *Utho (01), Aug 25, 2010
  16. Hehehe 
     
    #56 *iPimella (01), Aug 25, 2010
  17. chapter posted!
     
    #57 *-Utho (01), Aug 27, 2010
  18. Bump, hey guys srry for inactivity, throned chapter 7 will be up tomorrow and ive been doing a alot of things with my family for the last weeks of summer
     
    #58 Marodo, Aug 29, 2010
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