I know how that feels kind of , I feel unwanted , outcasted , casted out. Only one of my friends understands me anymore. Nice poem by the way Keena.
Nice poem but even in said times u must see that u must look to thefurther not the past yes it was said but if u don't look forward u will stay in the same place
This is one of the best pieces of poetry I have read in a long time. I believe you are an outstanding writer and should publish this and if you have any other poetry publish that. I have a great feeling you'd make it far. Maybe we can share some poetry sometime. Really though..this was an amazing ballad and all I can keep saying in my head is WOW! :mrgreen: I love this.