7. Battle Camp: the rebellion A beautiful, vividly described story. It has an interesting, mysterious plot, and the author seems really committed and dedicated to working on this story. The first chapter is out now: read it, this is definitely a story to follow.
Gandalf your story is awesome! I actually posted a review on it, but there was a posting glitch and it got deleted I'll right a new one if u like
8. GandalfTheGinger's Story Start with a creative, unique plot. Then add a dash of suspense. Sprinle on some likable characters and add a side of cliffhangers. Now you've got Gandalf's story. It's an enchanting tale that leaves you BEGGING for the next chapter. Stunningly creative, Gandalf has out did himself with this story. It's plots is interesting and espansive, and it's tied together with excellent characters. Sure to be a hit, check out this story TODAY!
Its not edited I have alot more to finish it might take a while I write on iPhone whil sittin in church lol
Pory we should almost start a tram u write rewiews. I write bios and someone else does story BTW GINGERS NEXT CHAP WILL B OUT SOON