...Nice. And I plan to type up the next chapters to give you long ones and include epic with boring. iZ
High-tech brain implosion! Don't get me wrong. I like blue. And it the design seemed very well thought out. I'm just gonna have to read that again. (There's a reason I don't write science fiction) But it was good anyway. So I'm going to end with the traditional feedback: MOAR!
Aha sorry about that lol, just needed to give an image for y'all's mind lol. And I have the next chapter already written I'll post in good time. PS: This is my iPad alt lol. Quoting the noobs, "VOLLEY ME!" Lol. iZ
Nice. I want an iPad! I was going to post today. But the next chapter requires a certain amount of evil. And... I'm watching Lord of the Rings. Which totally killed my evil mood. Because you can't help but want Frodo and Sam to win! (In other words:I'm much to lazy to post a chapter right now)
@Irin Yeah! It sure beats a Nook or whatever lol =P And I gotta use movies as reference too lol! I miss LoTR, I've gotta watch em again haha. Star Wars time! Lol. @Stora Hoping what would be long? Eh, what you see is what you get . Lol Jk Jk. Don't worry, it's gonna be short and quick though... As in the story posting speed... PERVS! iZaln
Hey, doesnt tavoc control the ones that aren't av8 and a1? So why r they shooting a ship that belongs in it's OWN territory.
Well, they're at war with Tellio ships, and the mission was to see if there were any ships in the outer rim of the Tavoc Quadrant and destroy it. iZaln