The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Yah go ahead I need to learn
     
  2. Take out "that dreadful day happened"
     
  3. And replace random guys with strange men
     
  4. Sorry for being out of sync( not in order) lol.

    For the begining. Say the year first (coma), then I am (characters name), and I live (place where character lives)
     
  5. Ok thanks I'll start writing tomorrow after I brain storm some more
     
  6. Okay, when you read with my input, doesn't it seem to flow a bit more easier?
     
  7. Yah they do thanks well I should be getting to sleep night
     
  8. How do ya do that
     
  9. Cool, a little wide though
     
  10. The app is called simple mind
     
  11. ill tell u my book sunday why not :lol:
     
  12. Ive been writing a book called "A Mirrored World" and I thought I'd tell u what it's about xP
    btw I'm only 12 so I appologize for any spelling or puncuation errors

    A Mirrored World is about a girl who thinks very little about herself. She thinks she is unimportant and feels very alone. She also comes from a rather large family with 9 kids, and being one of the eldest of the 9 she feels unloved by her parents since they don't have as much time for her as they do for the younger children.
    Then one day when her only friend goes missing,
     
  13. Oops I bumped the submit button xD
     
  14. Lol. It happens
     
  15. Her and one of her sister go looking for him. The find a tree that is very strange.. All of the sudden there's a flash of light and everythings a blur.
    When the light fades and they can see, they notice everything looks different.. The are in a mirrored world of their world.
    Her and her sister travel through the strange world and deal with all the chalenges of staying alive in order to find her friend. (and maybe even find a little bit about herself along the way.)
     
  16. New chapter out
     
  17. I have lots of stuff going on right now so I haven't gotten anytime to work on my book
     
  18. Sounds really good placenamehere.