I don't know if I'm up to the task, but I'll see if I can get their links here.
By the way, Angel. I, nor anyone here in FF, for that matter, am not a professional. We wrote and continue to write here because we feel like it, not for some snide self-proclaimed 'monarchs' to judge our works. If you want better writing that suits your distinct tastes of quality, then go search elsewhere. Or, if you'd like to address your problems with my writing, or anyone's writing here, go to the feedback thread for the respective stories and post your opinion there.