GUYS IF I DONT START GETTING MORE FEEDBACK ON 'A Changing Personality' THEN I MIGHT STOP WRITING IT! Please check it out Please. Pretty please with a cherry on top. :')
Hey guys and girls: Pending results, I won't be on for a month or so, though I'll probably check by a few times. Oh, and I made the Honor Roll. Now then, see y'all later!
I_Got_Da_Swagger Posts: 666 Joined: Sat Feb 12, 2011 3:24 pm 666 posts I read some of it. It was nice.
Hi umm... I was wondering if you all could check out my story I'm writing... It's called Out For Love or For Blood?
Your tenses shift dramatically, your character is impeccable- an impeccable Mary Sue. The Mary Sue of all Mary Sues. Your prose is unlike Stephanie Meyers' in the respect that you can't even write purple prose, one of the easiest damn things to do. You simply state things and leave them the way they are. That's not who you write a story.
I love physics. And English. And Precalculus. I love all the classes I need to take midterms in. In related news, I stalled on my java midterm for 20 minutes because I forgot that things actually went into the main method :| OF ALL THINGS TO FORGET IN MY KNOWLEDGE OF SIX PROGRAMMING LANGUAGES, I FORGOT THAT. I feel shame.
Gonna have to agree with Candi on the story. Also. It's very boring to read. Not plot wise but sentence structure wise.
Cheese. I am so very jelly. Of you. Because I want to take the classes I like, dammit. **** environmental science. I don't care about *that significant estuary-ish body of water approximately thirty minutes from my house that has been removed for location reasons* because I want to take programming. I will never need to know US History. English is good. Algebra is good. Writing is good. MS Office is good. I want to take the high school electives already..
Well I'm just taking AP US so I won't have to take it during college. Lets see, I have for next year planned: College-level physics College-level US history 2 Calculus, I think Advanced computer science (java) Accounting :S Spanish level 4 College-level English with British literature And gym. I hate English with a burning passion. Nobody should ever be so genuinely excited in class. I mean the students, I can kind of understand the teacher being nuts - they see symbolism in obscure adjectives on page 34, paragraph 3, sentence WHATEVER THE HELL. I'm really only interested in the calculus, physics and computer science.
Too bad with English, reading everything at all ever written by John Steinbeck is absolutely critical to your education and your career as an astronaut/computer engineer/athlete/hobo/marine biologist/marine/carpenter/politician/"politician"/ect.