The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Lol at least you don't have a clan to lead
     
  2. True. How's the clan going?
     
  3. Good. We have a 2/2 war stats
     
  4. That's great! Congratz!
     
  5. Your welcome! 
     
  6. -imustpokethis-

    So...weekend writing plans anybody? Plans other than writing?

    And I'm thinking about having a poetry night tonight. Good idea? Or no?
     
  7. -cricket, cricket-

    hmm...well...I guess I'll post one anyway....


    Forever Wandering

    Forever we wander, year after year,
    Forever we wander, sheding a tear,
    He blew me a kiss as we walked through the night.
    Forever he wanders, and shines in the light.

    Forever he wanders, just out of my reach,
    Forever he wanders, footprints on the beach.
    We stood by the water, soaked through with sea spray.
    Forever he wanders, and forever I pray. 

    Forever I wandered, and stood by his side,
    Forever he wandered, but I had to hide,
    Now ridden with guilt, and a sorrowful heart,
    Forever we wandered. But now, we're apart.

    Forever I wander now empty and weak,
    Forever I wander, without something to seek.
    And I looked beyond, and stood on the land,
    Without any footprints, just water and sand. 
     
  8. Good! I've some poetry to share! And I'm planing on finishing the next chapter in battle camp.
     
  9. Yay! I'm not alone rambleing to myself anymore!

    Well, the stage is all yours. Don't forget to turn the mike on.
     
  10. Test test? Good it's on. I've some poetry to share with you all tonight. I've selected this first piece, because it goes along with irins peice, here goes nothing!

    Wanderer

    She wanders through the woods,
    She hides under her hood,
    Her boots crunch in the leaves,
    As she wanders through the trees.

    Wanderer, wanderer,
    Wherever will you go?
    Wandering, wandering,
    In rain, shine, or snow.

    Wanderer, wanderer,
    Whoever is she?
    That hides under her hood,
    Never where she wants to be?

    Her eyes as sharp as hawks,
    She prances on the rocks,
    There's not a river to deep,
    Never a mountain to steep.

    Wanderer, wanderer,
    No ones as brave as her,
    Wandering, wandering,
    As if she never were.

    Wanderer, wanderer,
    Gone from here to there,
    The sight of her's uncommon,
    Those who see her stop and stare.

    Her family she must miss,
    She left her mother without one last kiss,
    I wish she'd come back, 
    If only for the things she didn't pack.

    Wanderer, wanderer,
    Where have you gone?
    Wandering, wandering,
    Like a lost fawn.

    Wanderer, wanderer,
    Where are you going to be?
    You said we were sisters for life,
    But never did you say you'd leave.
     
  11. I really like that one, Marian!

    
     
  12. Here's another piece I've decided to share. This is one of my free verse pieces, and I don't like the way it flows much, but I think I should share it with you. Enjoy!

    Eternity

    Everyone wants it
    But if they get it they'll wish they didn't 
    Forever bored, forever young
    No new experiences
    Forever in love
    With someone else
    Who will grow old
    And break your heart
    Family is gone
    Friends not there to help you up
    Even if you fall so hard
    That you never want to get up
    No one will come to your rescue
    It's a curse, not a blessing
    Eternity
     
  13. I'm gonna try to write next chapter in Wizardry World!!
     
  14. Actually, I really like the way it flows. I'm not able to do free verses very well at all, and I admire anyone who has the skill.

    I'll share one now. This is one of my favorites, and I hope you like it.
     
  15. Another poem!

    Precious moments

    The seconds passing by
    The minutes allready gone
    An hour wasted
    A day of nothing
    A month gone
    Every moment is precious

    Memories so hazy
    You should have paid attention
    What would you give
    For a moment more
    To spend with your friends
    Every moment is precious

    So careless before
    You wish you hadn't been
    Because maybe then
    You'd spend a minute more
    And you'd be more succesful
    Every moment is precious

    You dwell on sad memories
    And forget the happy
    You took them for granted
    If you'd have spent more time
    Maybe you'd have one happy thought left
    Every moment is precious

    Your life's ticking by
    Every second is a blessing
    You can wish all you want
    For things that won't come true
    But your allready gone
    Every moment is precious
     
  16. I'll Love You Forever

    Don't ever forget, what you said to me, 
    On the day we first kissed, by the trunk of our tree,
    You said that you'd love me, year after year,
    You said that you loved me, and that was my fear.

    Commitment had scared me, mistakes of my past.
    But you said our love was one that would last.
    And I loved you so deeply, I had to believe, 
    So I helped make our goal, one we could achieve.

    We married four years, right after that day.
    "I'll love you forever," is what you still say.
    And year after year, that promise you keep,
    From when we awake, to when we both sleep.

    But time had to pass, we were over the hill,
    "I'll love you for always," is what you say, still.
    You smiled your smile, and my eyes had shone,
    And for so many years, I was never alone.

    Then one rainy day, in a hospital bed,
    "You know I still love you," is what you had said.
    "I'll meet you in heaven, and thanks for the ride.
    I'll love you forever. I'll be at your side."
     
  17. That has a strong message, Marian. Your poems are really great!
     
  18. I love it! You've a gift with rhyming! This next one I post is one of my favorites!
     
  19. This is the first poem I wrote when I suddenly got really into poetry, hope u enjoy!


    I dedicate this poem to all who care enough to read the whole thing.


    Checkmate

    Lain out before me, a carpet of squares,
    Off in the distance, my enemies lair.

    With friends alongside me, and family around,
    We wait, anxiously, without a sound.

    Those beside me, move up one step,
    Trying to finish, the impossible treck.

    Feeling important, in the front line,
    Taking my place, by my friends sides.

    I move up and up, and clash with a knight,
    All my friends and loved ones, disapeer, out of sight.

    Me and him, him and me,
    Is all I hear, is all I see.

    At the very last moment, help finds it's way,
    Shining some hope, on that impossible day.

    Here I'm strong, and safe from harm,
    Comforted by, my families arms.

    Feeling invincible, I take a risk,
    Ignoreing the consequences, I throw a fist.

    As foolish as I was, I survive,
    Living and breathing, I am alive.

    Nothing can stop me, but I don't dare turn,
    For to see my family, I do so yearn.

    But soon I'm put down, thron into the murk,
    By those in the shadows, those who lurk.

    You are nothing, disposable, waste,
    The words sting, and leave something sour in my taste.

    Only a pawn, disguised as a knight,
    The enemy feels foolish, and will defeat me upon sight.

    Finally I turn, and look every which way,
    A feild of distruction, and there they lay.

    My family and friends, they lay on the ground,
    Asleep forever, eternally bound.

    With all hope lost I attach the strings,
    A puppet I will be, dispite the trapped feeling it brings.

    I am moved forward, and then to the side,
    The queen comes to take me, leaving the king open wide.

    At once I spot it, the fault in the plot,
    I try to warn them, but I don't mean alot.

    And then, and there, I decide enoughs enough,
    I move forward and left, proving I am tough.

    I feel a sense of victory, as the bishop slides across the slate,
    He knocks the king down, yelling checkmate.

    And altough I was not the one, to call victory,
    The other were blinded, and only I could see.

    This triumph is as much yours, as it is mine,
    Through love and hate we draw a thin line.

    I do not know, if this is what I want, or what I need,
    All I know, is that it planted a seed.

    Of doubt in my mind, that may never be the same,
    Without those that I love, how can I ever be sane?

    I went and I conquered, and I did it myself,
    But only now do I realize I needed everyone else.