The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Me and fanged 'book is posted:
    A twisted fairytale:eek:n the run
     
  2. Here's what I've put. Not much. Lol

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  3. You okay Ari?
     
  4. Nice, col!

    Umm, everything okay, Ari?
     
  5. Anyone here?
     
  6. Aww nuts...

    I'm lonely. :(
     
  7. Hey Marian!

    Hey zaln! Looks like the irate has been busey! You guys are doing a great job.
     
  8. Thnx. Btw I used the simple mind thing. I like it. Here's what I've got...

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    iZ
     
  9. Hey zaln and irin.

    Sry for leaving u, irin, I got sidetracked again!
     
  10. Hey W squared. So what's sup?

    iZ
     
  11. I've been writing like crazy, editing my edited paper, lol. Hoping to resume my story soon. Hbu?
     
  12. Hey guys! I've had and idea for a story and I wrote it down:

    The magic crystal

    In the magical world there is one ruler. That ruler wears the crystal of power around their neck. If one wears the crystal of power they become the most powerful person in the both the magical, and the human world.

    When the wearer of the crystal dies, they pass it on to their successor, and they inherit the ancient power. If the crystal should fall into the wrong hands, the results would be catastrophic. And many people, both guilty and innocent would die.
    ~
    IN THE MAGICAL WORLD

    "Sarah, how could you?" asks Henry, bearer of the crystal, and ruler or the lands.

    "How could I what?" asks Sarah, his sucessor.
    Sarah batts her eyes and pretends to be innocent. Shoot! He's onto me! She thinks.

    "You know what! You will be in prison for a long time!" Henry shouts, enraged. How could she! I've known her for years and I've never suspected a thing, thinks Henry. Sarah's angelic face twists into an evil smile

    "I won't be in prison, I will rule the lands! And you won't be able to stop me because you will be dead." She taunts. Finally, my moment of power! She savors the thought.

    "I'm not dead yet!" he cried. Sarah throws a lightning bolt at him, which sucks out almost all of his strength. He falls to the ground in agony.

    "You see, without your petty crystal, you are no match for me!" Sarah takes the crystal from around his neck, and admires the beauty of it. With his last bit of strength Henry lifts his hands; he let's the magic flow out of him and into the crystal, and transports it.

    "No!" Sarah screeched. "My crystal! Where did you send it?"

    "The human world, you'll never find it now!" Henry says. Sarah calmly unseaths her sword and runs Henry through. She was not pleased.
    ~
    IN THE HUMAN WORLD

    "Neat necklace!" compliments Cindy.

    "Thanks, I found it on the way to school today, at least one good thing comes from walking!" Kali says, rolling her eyes.

    "I especially like how the crystal kind of glows!" exclaims Alice.

    "We'd better hurry up, we're allready late for history!" Cindy reminds them. I wish we had more classes together, Alice thought, or atleast Cindy wouldn't keep reminding us that we were late, she wanted more time with her friends.

    "Nice of you to finally join us girls," Says Mr. Garliden. Ugh, Kali groans internally, I wish he's just give us a warning and send us on our way! "You know what? This time I'll give you a warning, sit down and listen girls, chop, chop!". Wow! Sweet! I wish; and he delivers! Kali grinned.

    If only she knew how true that was.



    How do you like it?
    - Lady
     
  13. Np, u seem full of gd ideas!