The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Aww that sounds really sweet, Ari. I'll have to read it soon.
     
  2. no irin I killed gangsta town and I intend to keep it that way. No one uses it and those who do are noobs with nukes
     
  3. You killed the best rp thread on law there ever was. I'm tempted to make a new one.
     
  4. Cool irin thx for wanting to read it
     
  5. I found a story I wrote on my new iPod, posted a little more on it
     
  6. No problem, Arimay.

    It's lookin good so far, col
     
  7. I'll post more later in the day
     
  8. Hi I got a new story called the shadow awakens here's a preview: sora waited for the attack he knew would come the sweat on his hands threatining to drop his sword alltogether he could distantly see a shadow approaching could that be him? Only time would tell suddenly something jumped at him from behind he retained conscious long enough to see a shadow like form pull him into the dark then his last conscious brain cell was stamped out like a flame
     
  9. it's good but pay attention to punctuation. You missed some commas and periods
     
  10. I agree with Jessica. It has some potential for a great story, but you need more puntuation as well as capitilazation. Other than that, it's a good start.
     
  11. ... I'm roleplaying at KaW Town... not as fun as I had hoped. Very unorganized and storyless
     
  12. Okay. What if...I made something like a gangsta town, but named it something else. It wouldn't be the same, or connected in any way, but it would be quite a bit more organized. Would you be upset If I did that?
     
  13. Idk it would either be called a fail or noob thread and probably filled with noob roleplayers. Won't be fun. Roleplay was a lot more fun in KaW when not a lot of people did it
     
  14. Yeah. And when the few people who did rp knew how to do it.

    -sigh-
     
  15. yeah. Kaw's just boring. Everything I loved is gone or perfected to ****
     
  16. Meh. It could be worse. I'm happy they made a fan fic forum for all the stories. It was annoying sifting through the off topic section.