You write a good fantasy by not following the rules. Ignore any limitations, and just let your mind roam. Don't think about "What will they do?" or "Why do thy do this?" but just let yourself go and just let your imagination guide you. That is how a good fantasy is written
Test: Chapter Four: Hostage Michelle Thumping, it was all I could hear. Thumping, neither there nor here. Thumping, what's that in my ears. Thumping, a deep lyrical thumping. Thumping, like the base drum. Thumping, a melodic hum.
Modified: Chapter Four: Hostage Michelle Thumping, it was all I could hear. Thumping, neither there nor here. Thumping, what's that in my ears. Thumping, a melodic hum. Thumping, like the base drum. Thumping, a deep lyrical thumping.
Hmmm... In superhero movies, I've noticed that they'll show a picture of the superhero's brain when they are using their powers and it'll show different colors pulsating together and traveling along an axon to different nerve cells. How can I describe that to where y'all would understand what I'm talking about in SD?
Um... Hullo. I've just joined KaW and noticed this cool looking section. And I read this cool story, called "Fury and a Half". The name alone drew me in, does anyone know when the next chapter is out? The same person wrote a story called "The Curse of Necromancy" IT WAS EPIC! So again. Does anyone know when the next chapters are out? I though I'd say it here cos it was really big. :shock:
Kinda impossible for you to have joined forums on this very day (I'm on PC) and have read both stories.
Look, I had a friend.He said forums on ANY site can be darn awesome . So I join this game, and read one story (The Curse of Necromancy) (sorry my first post wasn't chorologically correcct) and say to myself "Hey this is quite cool, it's gory but there's only one post " So I look through pages and see another one and say "MORE THAN ONE POST!!!!!!!!!". So I read it. nuff said.