The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. I'm probly gonna finish my story tomorow... Ik how it's gonna end
     
  2. Yes!!! More things to read!!!
     
  3. Working on any poems or mini-stories, irin?
     
  4. Besides Innocence and When the sun sets, no, not really. I do have a few older poems I havnt posted if anyone wants to read them, though, They're not as good as the newer ones.
     
  5. Had to ask, I'm gonna try to finish the story I'm on b4 I start another one, gonna post preview now
     
  6. Yay for previews!
     
  7. Preview of chapter 5

    There must have been one hundred steps leading up to the beautiful castle that was about to become my prison. I'd probably never go home and no one would know where I was, my mind wondered as we walked up the hundred steps. Where were the other boy and girl? Had they been found too? What was going to happen to me?

    I made a last attempt to escape. Struggling and kicking and screaming, I knew I was going to die if he led me in to the castle.
     
  8. This is about a year old. It was one of my personal favorites back then.

    Fallen

    I'll forgive and I'll forget
    And when it rains, I will get wet.
    But I had fallen, and was not caught,
    I don't remember what I forgot

    Everything that I had learned
    Lost it's place when I was burned
    But that's okay, I'll start anew
    And I will always look for you

    But should I ever fall again
    I know you'll catch me in the end
    Because i put my trust in you
    Look at me and know it's true.

    The darkness fades in hoped new light
    And there's no need to hold on tight
    But I ask you, don't let me go
    Just love me now, and let me know.
     
  9. Oooh, really good and suspencful!!! When is the whole chapter being posted!!!
     
  10. Nice poem irin! What do u think abot ch. 5?
     
  11. Thanks!

    And I looove it!!!
     
  12. Soon, I Want to make it interesting, it's working
     
  13. Yeah, it is! I really can't wait!
     
  14. I have to type it up soon! I'm wondering y i can't do this gd in school?
     
  15. Hmm...I find that school limits my creativity. Maybe since it's not an assignment, there's a lot more freedom, so you can make your story, yours. I remember last year my English teacher put all these requirements on a poem, so it wasn't my best one.
     
  16. Yeah, that would make sense, I'm glad to b writing, it's a lot more fun than I give it credit for!
     
  17. I hate it when there are restrictions, especially for the whole class. It make the whole assignment boring. 
     
  18. Yeah, I didn't think writing would be that much fun when I started either. But I love it now!
     
  19. @kimber, I agree, we should have the freedom to write what we want.