Sounds great, Feather! Can't wait for next chapter. You've inspired me the post a small preview of Broken. "Tell me about your dream." he said. "It was that day in the market place. When you gave me this ring." I held up my hand for him, displaying the small jade stone set in gold that he had given to me in Trebis. Niri sat down on my window seat, but said nothing, so I continued. "You also showed me a battle that day." His face betrayed nothing of what he was thinking, so I persisted. "It was the battle we had four days ago, wasn't it?" my question hung in the air. Several moments passed before Niri sighed. "It wasn't a battle I showed you." He said in a rough voice. "It was a warning."
I'll be carefully reading. If I started reading, chances are I'll read the rest of it until you guys quit it.
Meanwhile, Cheese had reappeared in his usual spot in the corner, drinking Writer's Rum. (He'd repaired the whole cafe and ordered a thousand barrels of Writer's Rum with it) He silently drank.
But an anti-alcohol system was in place. A magic match flew towards the barrels, setting them ablaze. The enchantment prevented the fire from damaging the cafe, but the rum was an inferno.
Cheese was completely still and silent for over five minutes, then said: YOU SICK TWISTED MONSTERS! And put a gun to his head