Sounds great, Feather! Can't wait for next chapter.
You've inspired me the post a small preview of Broken.
"Tell me about your dream." he said.
"It was that day in the market place. When you gave me this ring." I held up my hand for him, displaying the small jade stone set in gold that he had given to me in Trebis.
Niri sat down on my window seat, but said nothing, so I continued.
"You also showed me a battle that day."
His face betrayed nothing of what he was thinking, so I persisted.
"It was the battle we had four days ago, wasn't it?" my question hung in the air.
Several moments passed before Niri sighed. "It wasn't a battle I showed you." He said in a rough voice. "It was a warning."