The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. "Sorry about the crashing device!" Star yelled, "The cheque should cover everything."
     
  2. -Out-
    Maybe later...too tired to rp....
    -in-
     
  3. Oh btw, I'm trying out a medieval genre. I made a thread for it, if it's good I might turn it into a short story. Can u guys give me some feedback thanks!
     
  4. Lady momentarily awakens to the noise. She smiles at Star sleepily. "Youweposedtoissmeh." she says, her words slurred. Then she falls back to sleep.
     
  5. Riddle stared at star seeming to peer into his soul unsettling him.
     
  6. Irin glares at Star, then accepts the check without a work. She wasn't up for argueing today. "Thats it." Irin said. "Starting tomorrow I get rid of all caffine and alchole."
     
  7. "NO!" Lady say, sitting upright! She falls back onto her back and falls asleep again.
     
  8. Irin blinks, then shrugs. She limps to the counter and dumps the coffee in the sink.
     
  9. "Good idea." Star told her, "Hey, what does this do?"

    He pressed the last button on the remote.

    "Self-Destruct Sequence Activated." A feminine voice said the machine.

    Star then panicked, "I'll brb!" He yelled, actually saying the shorter brb.
     
  10. "Ummm...perhaps we should evacuate?" Irin said...she still wasn't sure what the contraption was.
     
  11. New chapter of salvation.

    Irin, pleash reads it! : D
     
  12. Check your feedback, Cheese.
     
  13. With no chance to disable the bomb, Star ran to the next street, shoved it in a dumpster and returned back.

    "Problem solved." He said, perfectly timed with a muffled background explosion.
     
  14. Oh...an NEW new chapter. Not a I-haven't-been-on-in-days new chapter.

    Right...
     
  15. Lol. Btw, I appreciate the feedback.
     
  16. Irin shrugged. "As long as A) I don't have to pay for the damages and B) the FBI doesn't break down my door, then whatever floats your boat." she felt tired and wished she hadn't dumped the coffee. Then she remembered her secret stash of coke.
     
  17. Seconds later, Cheese crashed to the floor, filled with Writer's Rum
     
  18. "You're lucky, the main explosives are still airborne..."

    Then a large aerial explosion shook the block, including Irin's coke.

    "Why did they even install that...?"