The Whisper of Expression

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jun 22, 2011.

  1. You're banned from this thread for derailing it. Please do not reply, nor post here again.
     
  2. :lol: he didnt derail it! He insulted your writing and you replyed!
     
  3. You're banned as well for derailing.
     
  4. It's always interesting to see modern technology appearing in poetry.

    Texting.



    Imagine if texting was around in the days of someone like Shakespere....

    "Thou hath drunken texted for the final time, you crazed jackal, forthbearing yonder private areas is the mark of the devil!!"
     
  5. No to all of them and please don't post another because if there's a possibility it's worse than the first... Well, spare us the thought
     
  6. You are probably a follower of dbo.
     
  7. I don't even know the dude. he's just a random person who appreciates the contributions I give to the forums.
     
  8. why dont you write on a forum for writeing rather than kaw?
     
  9. because they are fools. rather than posting material in a located specializing in amateur stories etc. they'd rather do it here. then complain when someone doesn't like their story and tells them so b
     
  10. @willy
    I agree... It does strike me as odd to see modern technology in poetry...
    Part of me wants to say it destroys the timeless nature of the work....
    Then, part of me wants to say that we need works of art representative of our current time that it might not be lost to history... I don't know. I still struggle with which route to go.
    Anywho, interesting poem. I'll need to read a few more before I can give constructive criticism on your style though :)
     
  11. I was descussing your post about banning dbo. Not derailing. *claps sarcasticly*
     
  12. I don't care. You are banned for posting off topic.
     
  13. Can you please show us all my 'off topic' post
     
  14. as long as we comment on the original subject of the thread. you have no authority to ban us off your thread.


    ps. you poem was dry.
     
  15. You are banned from posting here, regardless of topic. You made several attempts at derailing. Leave before I report you.
     
  16. I'm not detailing anything. ignoring the fact that detailing isn't against the ToU.

    as long as we are attempting to discuss the topic of this thread. you're outta luck.

    and lol @ you threatening to report me. I'm sure you've never stopped reporting me. what else is new?

    you just can't accept that your poem wasn't any good.